Yet another day 0 fix to the last patch

One day I will push out an update where I will break nothing, and will not have to immediately push out a fix, but that is not today - I accidentally broke a path in the previous update where you could not continue Tala's route, this is fixed now and I apologise for the inconvenience to the player who pointed it out.

Other more minor fixes include:

- Fixing a couple of my inabilities of recognising the difference between "it's" and "it is"

- Removed extra "that"'s from sentences where they were not needed or wanted

- Apparently I really liked using the word "crisp" when describing snow in the first draft, so the amount of crispiness is mentioned has now been reduced (and will continue to be further reduced, I think)

We are currently at version 0.64, so it gives me hope: by the time we get to 1.0 I have probably ironed out the worst wrinkles in my first draft of writing.

And by the time we reach 1.0 I will have finished all the major character route patches.